Question

Найдите неверно употребленные местоимения и напишите их правильные варианты. Graham was in love with a girl called Patricia. He wanted hers to marry he, and he asked her few times. but she always refused. He gave her a diamond ring which he had made herself and cost many money to make. But this wasn't good enough for her. She said there weren't much diamonds in its. Then he offered to buy her a big house which they could live by yourselves for the rest of theirs lives. This idea didn't have many success neither. She said that she couldn't imagine sheself living with him for so lots of years. "This would be too boring," she said. Finally, Graham told her that all he had would be hers if only she married his. "That is not enough for me." she said. "You haven't really got very many." 1) her. 2) 3) 4). 5) 6) 10) 11) 12). 13) 14) 15). 7) 16)

Answer 1

Sure, here are the corrections for the incorrectly used pronouns:

1. He wanted hers to marry her, and he asked her few times.
2. But she always refused. He gave her a diamond ring which he had made himself and cost a lot of money to make.
3. But this wasn't good enough for her. She said there weren't many diamonds in it.
4. Then he offered to buy her a big house which they could live in for the rest of their lives.
5. This idea didn't have much success neither.
6. She said that she couldn't imagine herself living with him for so many years.
7. Finally, Graham told her that all he had would be hers if only she married him.
8. "That is not enough for me," she said. "You haven't really got very many."

Note: There were more issues in the original text, but I have corrected the pronoun errors you mentioned.