Question

Проверьте сочинение на английском если есть ошибки пришлите текст исправленным. Заранее спасибо. The town of my dreams is called Sutton-Colfield. I live there for 5 years. In my town there are two-storeyed buildings with balconies and cottages with chimneys. In my town there is no Skyscrapers, the tallest building in my town is an old castle, it is located in the center of the city and serves as a museum. In my town very wide streets and there are no roads because the city is small .In my town there is no hotel, because citizens are very hospitable Also in my town there is a town hall, small shops and a pizzeria in which all townspeople gather on holidays. The town is surrounded by picturesque meadows on which sheep graze. In my town there are no plants but outside it there are windmills and solar batteries. I like to live in my city because there is no fuss in it like in big cities. Rarely it's lonely but friendly townspeople will always support you. Sometimes I would go out of town to visit other cities and countries. I think it's boring to stay in one place

Answer 1

*there are no skyscrapers - тк множественные число
*in my town there are very wide streets
*lonely в предпоследнем - Не очень корректно
скорее, filled with loneliness
*town WHERE people will always support you
* в последнем предложении just in one place

Answer 2

The town of my dreams is called Sutton-Colfield. I have been living there for 5 years. In my town, there are two-story buildings with balconies and cottages with chimneys. There are no skyscrapers in my town; the tallest building is an old castle located in the center of the city, serving as a museum. The streets in my town are very wide, and there are no roads because the city is small. There are no hotels in my town because the citizens are very hospitable. Additionally, there is a town hall, small shops, and a pizzeria where all townspeople gather on holidays. The town is surrounded by picturesque meadows on which sheep graze. There are no plants in my town, but outside of it, there are windmills and solar batteries.

I like living in my city because there is no hustle and bustle like in big cities. Although it is rarely lonely, the friendly townspeople will always support you. Sometimes, I would go out of town to visit other cities and countries because I think it's boring to stay in one place.