Question

Перевірте будь ласка текст і вкажіть на помилки! Dear Sir or Madam, I am a student of the school №75 in Lviv. This letter is regarding the competition. I am writing to tell you why impressed me the story Katheryn Winnick and why I want take part in this competition. I would like to take part in the competition of Canadian-Ukrainian organization O.W.L. because in my mind it will give me nice knowledge of English. I will be interested to meet with Ukrainian beyond the our country. Learn about their life in Canada. Find new friends who live overseas. I will be interested to see Canadian cities and cultural heritage of this country. I selected Katheryn Winnick because she does not eschews of origin and at every opportunity emphasizes that she is Ukrainian. I watched a movie with her participation and I like her acting skills. It interested me as an individual and I decided to explore her life. I look forward to answer. Your faithfully,

Answer 1

regarding TO the
why I am impressed with Katheryn Winnick's story 
I want TO take part 
TO my mind,it will give me some knowledge of English. 
I WOULD LIKE to meet UkrainianS beyond our country,to learn about their life in Canada, TO find new friends who live overseas( abroad)
 I WOULD LIKE to see 
I selected -I CHOSE
she isn`t ashamed of her national background and she emphasizes that she is Ukrainian at the first (the earliest)opportunity
She is interesting as an individual and I decided to turn onto her life.
I am looking forward to your answer.

Answer 2

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a student of school №75 in Lviv. This letter is regarding the competition. I am writing to tell you why the story of Katheryn Winnick impressed me and why I want to take part in this competition. I would like to participate in the competition of the Canadian-Ukrainian organization O.W.L. because I believe it will give me a good knowledge of English. I am interested in meeting Ukrainians beyond our country, learning about their life in Canada, and finding new friends who live overseas. I would also be interested in seeing Canadian cities and the cultural heritage of this country. I chose Katheryn Winnick because she does not shy away from her Ukrainian origin and emphasizes it at every opportunity. I have watched a movie with her participation and I like her acting skills. She interested me as an individual, and I decided to explore her life.

I look forward to your response.

Yours faithfully, [Your Name]