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проверьте пожалуйста текст на наличие ошибок!!!!!! My favourite season is summer because I have my birthday party. In june I went to Svetlogorsk to my grany and grandad. There I went to summer house. In july I went to Balgariya with my friends. When we came to Balgariya we celebrated my birthday party. We bought defrents sweets, sweet drink, crisps and ice-cream. Then we went to hotel. We celebreted my birhtday party in hotel. My friends gave me many presents. Next we went to the disco and dance there. Every day we went at the seasight. In agust I came back home and my perents, granes and I went to Russia. There we went to shops and cafes. Every evening we went to the quay. When we came back I went for a wolk. Every day I went for a wolk with my friends. I like summer very much!

Answer 1

My favourite season is summer because I have my birthday in this season. In June I went to Svetlogorsk to visit my granny and grandad. Then I went to the country house. In July I went to Bulgaria with my friends. In Bulgaria we celebrated my birthday . First we bought different sweets, some soft drinks, crisps and ice-cream. Then we went to our hotel. We celebreted my birhtday party in the hotel. My friends gave me many presents. After that we went to the disco and danced there. Every day we went to the beach and we swam in the sea. In August I went to Russia with my parents. There we went to shops and cafes. Every evening we went for a walk. It was very exciting! I like summer very much!

Answer 2

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"My favorite season is summer because I have my birthday party. In June, I went to Svetlogorsk to visit my granny and granddad. There, I went to the summer house. In July, I went to Bulgaria with my friends. When we came to Bulgaria, we celebrated my birthday party. We bought different sweets, sweet drinks, crisps, and ice-cream. Then we went to a hotel. We celebrated my birthday party in the hotel. My friends gave me many presents. Next, we went to the disco and danced there. Every day we went to the seaside. In August, I came back home, and my parents, grandparents, and I went to Russia. There, we went to shops and cafes. Every evening we went to the quay. When we came back, I went for a walk. Every day I went for a walk with my friends. I like summer very much!"

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