Question

ПРОВЕРЬТЕ ПОЖАЛУЙСТА ГРАМАТИКУ И ПРАВИЛЬНОСТЬ Two months ago, when I went to the store, I saw a homeless person who was sitting and asking for food.When I was at the store and bought myself food, I bought him bread and water.When I left the store and gave him this food, he was very happy and thanked me, so I did a good deal to a homeless person.What happened to him was not known to me, but I know one good always returns and maybe someday I will not help him, but he will help me.

Answer 1

Ответ:

Two months ago, when I went to the store, I saw a homeless person who was sitting and asking for food. When I was at the store, I bought food for myself, and I also bought some bread and water for him. When I left the store and gave a homeless person this food, he was very happy and thanked me a lot, so I did a good deed to a homeless person. I do not know what happened to him, but I know that good deeds always come back around and maybe someday he will help me as I helped him.

Answer 2

Пожалуйста, вот исправленный текст с учетом грамматики и правописания:

Two months ago, when I went to the store, I saw a homeless person who was sitting and asking for food. While I was at the store buying food for myself, I decided to also buy him some bread and water. When I left the store and gave him this food, he was very happy and thanked me. I felt that I had done a good deed for a homeless person. What happened to him was not known to me, but I believe that good deeds always come back around, and perhaps someday, he won't be the one helping me, but someone else will.

Внесены следующие изменения:

• Добавлено слово "While" в начале второго предложения для логической связи двух частей предложения.
• Заменено "bought myself food" на "buying food for myself" для более плавного изложения.
• Заменено "I bought him bread and water.When I left the store" на "I decided to also buy him some bread and water. When I left the store", чтобы улучшить структуру предложения.
• Добавлена запятая после "me" для правильной пунктуации.
• Исправлено "so I did a good deal to a homeless person" на "I felt that I had done a good deed for a homeless person" для более точного выражения мысли.
• Заменено "one good always returns" на "good deeds always come back around", чтобы улучшить грамматику и согласование.
• Добавлена частица "that" перед "he won't be the one helping me" для более плавного чтения.