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100 Балов, нет времени обьяснять, ладно шучу :),есть мои наброски, ваша задача обработать этот текст , переведя отрывки с русского на английский , исправить граматику , и правописание слов , что то заменить синонимом итд , короче говоря переработайте это сочинение, незнающим просьба не браться за работу nowadays, 17 tons of food are thrown out every year, 4 of which are suitable for consumption. In this essay, I would like to talk about the amount of food that is thrown out by large enterprises I believe that large corporations shouldn’t carry fresh products to the trash. I think so because it is illogical. In empty move’s away (в пустую уходит) food, which could help starving people. . I will prove it by giving 3 reasons 1 reason Is загрязнение окружающей среды. выбрасываемые продукты в основном запакованные вызывают загрязнение окружающей среды. и никому нет до этого дела. об этой проблеме говорят все. Но супермаркеты продолжают выбрасывать упакованные овощи,фрукты,мясо. The example was written in the text, there, man found many sealed vegetables in the trashbin that was near the supermarket . 2 reason is нелогичное распределение финансов. когда в других странах идет голод. в мусорках пропадают готовые продукты. звучит безумно , но это реально, в Европе просто выбрасывают рабочие вещи, в том числе еду. in the text man fond 200 edible turkeys and 1 flatscreen tv 3 reason is неспособность мыслить о последствиях. никто не думает о том, что люди могут быть недовольны этой ситуацией. поэтому и появляются такие термины, как фриган К примеру так же произошел термин веган In conclusion: я доказал, что крупные корпорации не должны выбрасывать оставшуюся еду. и что каждая пища, которая, возможно, для употребления не должно быть выброшена

Answer 1

Nowadays 17 tons of food are thrown out every year, 4 tons of it are suitable for consumption. In this essay, I would like to talk about the ejection of food, that is still in a good condition, by large enterprises.
I believe that powerful corporations should not throw out food without any causes. From a logical point of view, it is a waste of money, resources and time for producing in. Enormous amount of sustenance that become useless for corporation can be used for helping homeless people, that do not even have money to buy healthy and fresh meal.
The first thing that need to be said is pollution caused by this problem. Discards of food, especially in plastic wraps, are responsible for environmental degradation. This ecological problem had been discussed for long time, however, hardly had someone tried to seriously solve it. Thus supermarkets and other business concerns continue wasting outstanding goods.
The example was written in the text. There we can see a situation when a man finds sealed vegetables in trash bins next to the supermarket.
Secondly, wasting food is equal to wasting money. It means that it is а misallocation of resources. Some people just throw away the food that ran out meanwhile there are people who do not have a possibility to eat even that food - they are starving people and they need any nutrition. It sounds impossible but it is true. Europe alone has just an incredible amount of such people.
In the next text we see that second situation when a man finds 200 edible turkeys and 1 flat screen TV.
Thirdly, this shows our failure to think about consequences. Nobody does not take care of the future of our planet at all. Nevertheless, there are some people who are against for inaction and they investigate this problem. During the investigation, new words appear, for example, a freegan or vegan.
From these arguments one must conclude that every piece of food that can be consumpted should be consumpted. We cannot just throw food away.

Answer 2

Nowadays, 17 tons of food are thrown out every year, only 4 of which are suitable for consumption. In this essay, I would like to discuss the amount of food wasted by large corporations. I believe that these companies should not discard fresh products. It is illogical to throw away food that could be used to help feed starving people.

I will provide three reasons to support my argument. Firstly, discarded packaged products mainly cause environmental pollution, and this is a well-known problem. Supermarkets continue to throw away packaged vegetables, fruits, and meat. For example, a man found many sealed vegetables in a trash bin near a supermarket.

Secondly, the financial distribution is illogical when many countries are suffering from hunger, and ready-to-eat food is being wasted in garbage bins. It sounds crazy, but it is a reality in Europe where workers throw away things, including food. In the text, the man found 200 edible turkeys and 1 flatscreen TV in the garbage.

Thirdly, the inability to think about the consequences of food waste is a major problem. Nobody thinks about how people may be unhappy with this situation. This is why terms like "frigan" and "vegan" have emerged.

In conclusion, I have shown that large corporations should not discard leftover food. Every edible item that can be consumed should not be thrown away.