Question

СРОЧНО ПРОВЕРЬТЕ ПРЯМ ЩАС НАДО ПЕРЕД ШКОЛОЙ, АНГЛ 1-ЫЙ УРОК!!! After school, I clean up and start doing homework.I have long wanted to write you a letter.If there is a lot of time left after classes, I go for a walk. But more often than not, he remains, because I get distracted during homework, and I draw.I have more time on weekends. I get up, have breakfast, (again) clean up the room and start drawing (for a long time). Тhen I'll go for a walk.​

Answer 1

After school, I clean up and start doing homework.

I have long wanted to write you a letter.

If there is a lot of time left after classes, I go for a walk.

But more often than not, it is postponed, because I get busy doing my homework, I draw.

I have more time at weekends.

I get up, have breakfast, (again) clean up the room and start drawing (for a long time).

Тhen I'd go for a walk.​

Answer 2

Sure, I'll check and correct the English text for you:

"After school, I clean up and start doing homework. I have wanted to write you a letter for a long time. If there is a lot of time left after classes, I go for a walk. But more often than not, there isn't much time left because I get distracted during homework, and I end up drawing instead. I have more time on weekends. I get up, have breakfast, clean up the room (again), and then start drawing for a long time. After that, I'll go for a walk."

I made some minor changes to improve the overall flow and grammar. Now it reads more smoothly and accurately conveys your message. Good luck with your English 1st lesson at school!