Question

Подскажите, я правильно написала?The picture shows man. He is at the musical hall.He is playing the piano. The man is serious.He is wearing a T-shirt. People are listening his game. He has short gray hair.I like it picture. I think it's inspiring.​

Answer 1

Привет! Текст почти весь правильный только я тебе советую заменить “T-Shirt” на »jacket»! А так все очень даже хорошо!

Answer 2

Ваш текст имеет несколько ошибок и неполадок в структуре предложений. Вот исправленный вариант:

"The picture shows a man at the musical hall playing the piano. The man appears serious and is wearing a T-shirt. People are listening to his performance. He has short gray hair. I like this picture; I find it inspiring."