Question

Пожалуйста, проверьте сочинение на наличие ошибок. Особенно грамматических. Исправьте, если есть. Modern technologies in our life. I`d like to tell you about modern technologies and their influence on our life. In nowadays, many various gadgets appear and opinions of different people about them are questionable. Some suppose that sophisticated gadgets are really useful and necessary, while others find them absolutely awful as they influence people badly. As for me, I think new technology is very useful; I like the electronics and I`m an adherent of the various gadgets. I can`t imagine my life without mobile phone, televisions, computer and different electronic gadgets. I spend too much time using the computer. I read books there, search on the Internet, type text, watch films and listen to music. I also find mobile phone is very useful because it helps me to call with my friends in any time. I`m absolutely sure of that the various devices make our lives easier and more interesting.

Answer 1

1.many various gadgets=>various gadgets
2. search on the Internet=> surf the internet
3.I also find mobile phone=>I also find out, that mobile phone
4. it helps me to call with=>it helps me to call
5.sure of that the various=>sure that the various

Answer 2

I`d like to tell you about modern technologies and their influence on our life. In nowadays, many various gadgets appear and opinions of different people about them are questionable. Some suppose that sophisticated gadgets are really useful and necessary, while others find them absolutely awful as they influence people badly. As for me, I think new technology is very useful; I like the electronics and I`m an adherent of the various gadgets. I can`t imagine my life without mobile phone, televisions, computer and different electronic gadgets. I spend too much time using the computer. I read books there, search on the Internet, type text, watch films and listen to music. I also find mobile phone is very useful because it helps me to call with my friends in any time. I`m absolutely sure of that the various devices make our lives easier and more interesting.

The text contains some grammatical errors. Here's the corrected version:

I'd like to tell you about modern technologies and their influence on our lives. Nowadays, many various gadgets appear and opinions of different people about them are questionable. Some suppose that sophisticated gadgets are really useful and necessary, while others find them absolutely awful as they influence people badly. As for me, I think new technology is very useful; I like electronics and I'm an adherent of various gadgets. I can't imagine my life without a mobile phone, television, computer, and different electronic gadgets. I spend too much time using the computer. I read books there, search on the Internet, type text, watch films, and listen to music. I also find the mobile phone very useful because it helps me to call my friends at any time. I'm absolutely sure that various devices make our lives easier and more interesting.