Question

50 баллов!!!! Знатоки английского, помогите, пожалуйста) нужно просто найти ошибки в тексте!) Good evening. My name is Kate ( Katya). I'm from Russia. I am looking for penfriends from UK. I'm going to visit UK, and practice my English. It is useful to me for exams. My mom wants me to become a doctor! However, I plan to be a teacher or a translator! I'm interested in foreign literature, music, beading and embroidery.. By the way, my favorite book - Golding William "Lord of the Flies". I like learning, because I am patient and responsible! I also have a sense of humor so that you will not be bored! I'm sorry, I have no photos,so I will describe myself. I have green eyes, long hair, a snub nose. I am not high (only 160 cm). However, this does not interfere with sports. I lead a healthy lifestyle and eat healthy foods. I live with my mom, dad and younger sister. We have good relations. Dad helps me with homework. But he does not speak English. In school, I'm good. Sometimes it's hard for me given, but I'm not sad. My favorite subject is English. I also like Russian. Maybe I'll be a teacher (if my mother let go). Write me and tell me about yourself.

Answer 1

We have good relationship.
I also have good sense of humor, so that's why you will not be bored
food( ед. число)
и в скобках можно If my Mother let me go

Answer 2

Good evening! My name is Kate (or Katya). I'm from Russia, and I am looking for penfriends from the UK. I'm going to visit the UK to practice my English, which will be useful for my exams. My mom wants me to become a doctor, but I plan to be a teacher or a translator instead.

I'm interested in foreign literature, music, beading, and embroidery. By the way, my favorite book is "Lord of the Flies" by William Golding. I enjoy learning because I am patient and responsible. I also have a sense of humor, so you won't be bored talking to me.

I apologize for not having any photos, but I can describe myself. I have green eyes, long hair, and a snub nose. I am not very tall (only 160 cm), but that doesn't stop me from participating in sports. I lead a healthy lifestyle and eat nutritious foods. I live with my mom, dad, and younger sister, and we have a good relationship. My dad helps me with my homework, although he doesn't speak English.

In school, I perform well. Sometimes I find certain subjects challenging, but I don't let it bring me down. My favorite subject is English, and I also enjoy studying Russian. Maybe I'll become a teacher if my mother allows it.

Please write to me and tell me about yourself.