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Dear Tom, I‘m sorry I haven‘t written for so long, because I have been preparing for my exams. You know that it is very difficult to study 24/7. However, I have some interesting activities in school life and want that you join me. Our school takes part in Erasmus + Project “Cultures and Languages“ and this year our class should find a partner from another country and represent our culture and language. I think it will be something like “exchange of knowledge”. I know you like to make paper models, so maybe you can present your country in the paper? I think it will be great! I remembered your traditional hat which you made out of candy wrappers under the Snickers! It was fantastic! Also, you have been written that last summer started to do your center paper mock. Have you been already finished it? Don‘t worry, you have enough time, because the final part of the project will be in the July. First you will be arrive to us and I reveal the small secret about you activities in the Lithuania. We prepare a folk song which you learn and sing on the final concert. I think it will be good to show you Rumshiskes and Aukshtaitijos national park. You now that at the 23-24 June night it is Midsummer Night. In the Lithuania it calls “Jonines”. It will be great chance to see traditional dance, costumes and taste some meal and drinks. I think it good experience and we can know better each other. Think about it, and discuss with you classmates, please. So, I will be glad to hear what you think about it. Send you answer until 31 of December. Write back soon. Best wishes, Name Проверьте на ошибки, пожалуйста!

Answer 1

В целом неплохо, но есть две ошибки

You now that at the 23-24 June   - You know
I think it good experience  - I think it will be a good experience  

Answer 2

Dear Tom, I apologize for not writing to you for such a long time, as I have been busy preparing for my exams. You know how challenging it is to study non-stop. However, I have some exciting news from my school life and I would love for you to join me. Our school is participating in the Erasmus Project "Cultures and Languages" this year, and our class is tasked with finding a partner from another country to represent our culture and language. It's like an exchange of knowledge.

Since I know you enjoy making paper models, I thought maybe you could present your country using paper art. I think it would be fantastic! I still remember the incredible traditional hat you made out of candy wrappers under the Snickers bar. It was truly amazing! By the way, you mentioned that last summer you started working on your centerpiece paper mock. Have you finished it yet? Don't worry, you still have plenty of time, as the final part of the project will take place in July.

When you arrive here, I have a little surprise for you regarding your activities in Lithuania. We are preparing a folk song for you to learn and perform at the final concert. Additionally, I think it would be great to show you Rumšiškės and Aukštaitija National Park. You know that on the night of June 23-24, we celebrate Midsummer Night, which we call "Joninės" in Lithuania. It will be a wonderful opportunity for you to experience traditional dances, costumes, and taste some traditional meals and drinks. I believe it will be a valuable experience for both of us to get to know each other better.

Please take some time to think about it and discuss it with your classmates. I would love to hear your thoughts. Please send your answer by December 31. Write back soon.

Best wishes, [Your Name]

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