Question

Помогите пожалуйста! Я написала диалоги, но в английском я профан. Исправьте, пожалуйста, грамматические ошибки и, может, дополнить чем-нибудь можете. Помогите сделать диалоги более "живыми".1) Problems with tenage children:- Hi, Monika- Hi, Clara- I have a problem!- What happiened?- I think i feel in love with Jack.- Where is the problem?- He's so handsome and smart. He doesen't attention to me.- Don't be silly. I saw how he lokked at you. I think he like you.- O realy? Great, thank you!- I's my pleasure2) A wedding- Kaley, you remember our parents anniversary is coming us soon?- Let's think about what to get them.- I have some Ideas. I remember that mum wanted to take a holiday. But we don't have a lot money.- I think it would be a good dea to buy two tichets for a theater. That not very expensive, but interesting. I think they'll have a nice time.- Good idea!3) A visit to the dentist- Hi, doctor Phil.- Hello, mr Freema. What wrong?- I have a severe toothache.- Ok. Sit down and open you' mounth.- Do you think it's seriosly?- Nope, but you have visit to me after a week.- Thank's, doctor.

Answer 1

1) Problems with teenagers:
-Hi, Monika
-Hi, Clara
-I have a problem!
-What happened?
- I think I fell in love with Jack.
-What is the problem?
-He's so handsome and smart. He doesn't pay attention to me.
-Don't be silly. I saw how he looked at you. I think he likes you.
-Oh, really? Great, thank you!
-You are welcome/

2)A wedding
-Kaley, do you remember our parent`s anniversary is coming soon?
-Let's think what we shall give them
-I have some ideas. I remember that my Mum wanted to celebrate their feast. But we don't have a lot of money.
-I think it will be a good idea to buy two theater tickets. Thay are not very expensive, but it will be very interesting for our parents. I think they'll have a nice time.
-What a good idea!


3) A visit to the dentist
- Hi, doctor Lobanov.
- Hello, Mrs Freema. What is wrong?
- I have a severe toothache.
- Ok. Sit down and open your mounth.
- Do you think it is serious?
- No, but you will have to come to me next week.
-Thank you, doctor.

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Answer 2

1)teenage, happened, doesn't , looked, oh.
2) просто coming soon, a lot OF money, idea, two tickets TO THE theatre,.
3) what IS wrong?, seriously, 

Answer 3

1) Problems with teenage children: - Hi, Monika. - Hi, Clara. - I have a problem! - What happened? - I think I fell in love with Jack. - Where is the problem? - He's so handsome and smart, but he doesn't pay attention to me. - Don't be silly. I saw how he looked at you. I think he likes you. - Oh, really? Great, thank you! - It's my pleasure.

2) A wedding: - Kaley, do you remember our parents' anniversary is coming up soon? - Let's think about what to get them. - I have some ideas. I remember that mom wanted to take a holiday, but we don't have a lot of money. - I think it would be a good idea to buy two tickets for a theater. It's not very expensive, but interesting. I think they'll have a nice time. - Good idea!

3) A visit to the dentist: - Hi, Doctor Phil. - Hello, Mr. Freema. What's wrong? - I have a severe toothache. - Okay. Sit down and open your mouth. - Do you think it's serious? - Nope, but you have to visit me after a week. - Thank you, Doctor.