Question

Найдите, пожалуйста, ошибки и укажите их. МНОГО БАЛЛОВ! Текст - I'd like to tell you about my friend. His name Mike. We met him in the park. It was summer. He is very tall, plump body. He was then fourteen years old. His face was oval. Hair long and black. Brown eyes and a small nose. I like it because it is pleasant to communicate with him and we have common interests. We love dogs.

Answer 1

Это английский, не русский. Здесь каждый раз надо писать местоимения, они как в русском не опускаются ;)
I'd like to tell you about my friend. His name is Mike. We met him in the park. It was in summer. He was very tall and had a plump body. He was then fourteen years old. His face was oval. He had long and black hair. Also, he had brown eyes and a small nose. I like him because it is pleasant to communicate with him and we have common interests. For example, we love dogs.

Answer 2

Вот исправленный текст:

"I'd like to tell you about my friend, Mike. We met him in the park during the summer. He is very tall with a plump body and was fourteen years old at the time. His face is oval, with long black hair, brown eyes, and a small nose. I enjoy communicating with him because we share common interests, especially our love for dogs."

Ошибки и исправления:

1. "His name Mike" - исправлено на "His name is Mike" для корректного использования глагола "to be". 2. "plump body" - оставлено без изменений, но стоит отметить, что это выражение может восприниматься как негативное. Если вы хотите смягчить выражение, можно использовать "he has a sturdy build". 3. "Hair long and black" - изменено на "with long black hair" для лучшей связности предложения. 4. "I like it because it is pleasant to communicate with him" - изменено на "I enjoy communicating with him" для более естественного выражения. 5. "We love dogs" - оставлено без изменений.

Текст теперь звучит более грамматически правильно и легче воспринимается.