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Правильно написанно(граматика) И укажите где исправить     Hi!I received your letter! I was glad of hearing from you as well! Thanks for your invitation. But I am compelled to upset you, I can't go with you on concert. The matter is that my parents are going to go  to the cinema and I will be compelled to nurse my little brother. On the next week i wiil be free and we can go on another concert. Thanks for understanding! Well will have fine.

Answer 1

Hi!

I have got  your letter! I was glad to hear from you again! Thank you for your invitation. But I am compelled to upset you, I can't go with you to the concert because of my parents who are going  to the cinema at the same time and I have to stay with my little brother. Next week I wiil be free and we will be able go to another concert. Thanks for understanding! 

 

Yours,

Nina

Answer 2

Hi! I received your letter! I was glad to hear from you too! Thank you for your invitation. However, I regret to inform you that I am unable to go with you to the concert. The reason is that my parents are planning to go to the cinema, and I will have to take care of my little brother. Next week, I will be free and we can go to another concert. Thank you for understanding! We will have a great time.

Corrections:
- "I was glad of hearing from you as well!" should be "I was glad to hear from you too!"
- "But I am compelled to upset you" should be "However, I regret to inform you"
- " " is an HTML code for a non-breaking space and should be removed.