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Помогите, срочно, пожалуйста проверьте грамотность англ. текста I can still say a few words about our apartment. Our apartment is located in the city center. It has 3 bedrooms and kitchen . We have a balcony, with a beautiful view of the city can be seen. Summer is very warm and a lot of places, which is popular with tourists. Our city is popular among them перевод: Я могу еще сказать пару слов о нашей квартире. Наша квартира расположена в центре города. В ней находится 3 спальни и кухней. У нас есть балкон, а с него виден красивый вид города. Летом очень тепло и много мест, которым нравятся туристом. Наш город популярен среди них

Answer 1

..with a beautiful view of the city.(остальное убери).  Summer is very warm and there are a lot of places. Все остальное хорошо.

Answer 2

I can still say a few words about our apartment. Our apartment is located in the city center. It has 3 bedrooms and a kitchen. We have a balcony with a beautiful view of the city. In the summer, it gets very warm, and there are many places that are popular with tourists. Our city is popular among them.

Translation: Я могу еще сказать пару слов о нашей квартире. Наша квартира расположена в центре города. В ней находится 3 спальни и кухня. У нас есть балкон, а с него виден красивый вид города. Летом очень тепло и много мест, которым нравятся туристам. Наш город популярен среди них.

Overall, your English text is quite good, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that need to be addressed. Below is the corrected version of your text:

"I can still say a few words about our apartment. Our apartment is located in the city center. It has three bedrooms and a kitchen. We also have a balcony with a beautiful view of the city. In the summer, it gets very warm, and there are many places that are popular with tourists. Our city is popular among them."

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