Question

Пожалуйста, найдите ошибки: my name is Julia. I am fourteenth years old. l was born on the fourteenth of April. I have lather, father and sister. I don't like animals, so I do not have a pet. But I make to learn something new. I'm in the ninth grade. We study last of the subjects at school, but my favorite subject is literature. When I read a book, I have a lot of emotions. It's very important for me, because I am very emotional person.My favorite season of year is autumn. I like rainy weather and wind.Sometimes I like to be alone. Because at this time I can to think about many things.Music plays an important role in my life. I listen : rock, instrumental music, ballads, k pop and many others. I think, what music can influence people

Answer 1

Второе предложение. не fourteen без th на конце. дальше... эм... lather это типа mother? 6 предложение. не make а want. 8 не last а lots и the не надо.
дальше все вроде правильно. в конце. там, где ты говоришь почему любишь побыть в одиночестве. там не can to а просто can.
в остальном вроде все верно.

Answer 2

Here are the corrections to the text:

"My name is Julia. I am fourteen years old. I was born on the fourteenth of April. I have a mother, father, and sister. I don't like animals, so I do not have a pet. But I enjoy learning something new. I'm in the ninth grade. We study a lot of subjects at school, but my favorite subject is literature. When I read a book, I have a lot of emotions. It's very important for me because I am a very emotional person. My favorite season of the year is autumn. I like rainy weather and wind. Sometimes I like to be alone because at this time I can think about many things. Music plays an important role in my life. I listen to rock, instrumental music, ballads, k-pop, and many others. I think that music can influence people."