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Чек май хоум ворк плис на ошибки + было бы не плохо если б ещё что нибудь добавили -Hi Vika !How are you?How is your winter holidays?Do you visited your relatives in Poland?Tell me all your news!Here some new's for you.My holiday began on the 28 th of December , but I was at home a week before, because I was ill . But I was at good mood because New Year's Day and two weeks of the rest will come soon .In the evening before New Year I and my younger brother decorated the Christmas tree . Also we decorated our yard and cooked gingerbread mans . I celebrated New Year with my family , but after the 12 p.m I went to my friends and we together wrote letter to the future with our hopes and plans , also we exchanged gifts .It was the best New Year for the last years!!!The whole holidays I were spending a lot of time with my friends and we often went to street festivities at city square . I'm 16 years old but anyway I still love play snowballs , make snowmen and ride on the sledge . Luckily , the snow fell and we were able to enjoy winter fun . Then the weather was bad , we stay at home and watch New Years films like *Home alone* and etc.Well , I must finish .Lots of love , Daryna.​

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Hi Vika!

How are you? How is your winter holiday? Have you visited your relatives in Poland? Tell me all your news!

Here are some news for you.

My holiday began on the 28th of December, but I was at home the week before that because I was ill. But my mood was still good because of the upcoming New Year's Day. Moreover, I still had two weeks of rest and relax ahead.  

In the evening before the New Year celebration, my younger brother and I decorated the Christmas tree. Also, we decorated our yard and cooked gingerbread men. I celebrated New Year with my family, but after midnight I went to my friends and we together wrote a letter to the future with our hopes and plans. Also, we exchanged gifts. It was the best New Year I have ever had!

I spent a lot of time with my friends and we often went to watch the street festivities in the city square. I'm 16 years old but anyway, I still love to play snowballs, make snowmen and ride on the sled. Luckily, the snow fell and we were able to enjoy winter fun. When the weather was bad, we stayed at home and watched Christmas films like *Home alone* and so on.

Well, I must finish.

Lots of love ,

Daryna.

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"Hi Vika! How are you? How are your winter holidays? Did you visit your relatives in Poland? Tell me all your news! Here's some news for you.

My holiday began on the 28th of December, but I was at home a week before because I was ill. However, I was in a good mood because New Year's Day and two weeks of rest were coming soon. On the evening before New Year's, my younger brother and I decorated the Christmas tree. We also decorated our yard and baked gingerbread men. I celebrated New Year with my family, but after 12 a.m., I went to my friends' place. We wrote letters to the future with our hopes and plans, and exchanged gifts. It was the best New Year in years!

Throughout the holidays, I spent a lot of time with my friends, and we often attended street festivities at the city square. Even though I'm 16 years old, I still love playing with snowballs, making snowmen, and riding on sledges. Luckily, it snowed, and we were able to enjoy winter fun. When the weather was bad, we stayed at home and watched New Year's films like "Home Alone" and so on.

Well, I must finish now. Lots of love, Daryna."

I made some minor grammar and punctuation corrections and added a bit more detail for clarity. Overall, it reads more smoothly now.