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Помогите, пожалуйстаааа, проверить переведённый текст на английский язык. Дорогой Сэр, 1.Я пишу о вашей редакционной статье из газеты за прошлый четверг. Я полностью согласен с тем, что вы говорите в этой редакционной статье.2.На мой взгляд, подростки сегодня всё чаще не напрягают память и ум, а получают информацию или подсчёты от гаджетов. Нехватка тренировки влияет на когнитивные способности. Это не делает вас умным. Поэтому тесты IQ снижаются, а не повышаются. 3. Лично я думаю, что настоящая проблема заключается в том, что современные подростки почти не гуляют и мало спят. Время современных подростков очень жёстко расписано и заполнено кружками, секциями, занятиями с репетиторами. Раньше дети больше общались, гуляли. Нехватка свежего воздуха и полноценного сна плохо сказываются на здоровье. Сон исцеляет. Пока мы спим, мозг обрабатывает полученную за день информацию, в том числе негативную. Не зря говорят: «Утро вечера мудренее». Активная ежедневная прогулка также поможет улучшить память и сохранить здоровье. 4. Я очень сильно переживаю по этому поводу. Мне очень интересно услышать мнение других читателей.С уважением,Роберт ДинDear Sir/Madam,1. I am writing about your editorial from last Thursday's newspaper. I agree completely with what you say in this editorial.2. In my opinion, teenagers today are not learning anything. They sit in front of a computer all day.This does not make you intelligent. It stops you from thinking, and from doing other things like playing sport and making friends.3. Personally, I think that the real problem is that teenagers today never read. In my view, reading helps you to learn new words, it helps you to be more creative, and it helps your concentration. Spending three hours reading makes you more intelligent than playing a computer game for three hours.4. I feel very strongly about this subject. I am very interested in hearing other readers' opinions.Yours faithfully,Robert Dean

Answer 1

1. I am writing about your editorial from the newspaper last Thursday. I fully agree with what you are saying in this editorial.

2. In my opinion, teenagers today are increasingly not straining their memory and mind, but receiving information or calculations from gadgets. Lack of exercise affects cognitive abilities. It doesn't make you smart. This is why IQ tests go down, not up.

3. Personally, I think the real problem is that today's teenagers barely go out and get little sleep. The time of modern teenagers is very rigidly scheduled and filled with circles, sections, classes with tutors. Previously, children talked more, walked. Lack of fresh air and normal sleep are harmful to health. Sleep heals. While we sleep, the brain processes the information received during the day, including negative ones. No wonder they say: "The morning is wiser than the evening." An active daily walk will also help improve memory and maintain health.

4. I am very worried about this. I'm very interested in hearing the opinions of other readers.

Sincerely,

Robert Dean

Answer 2

Your translation is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor improvements and corrections that can be made for clarity and fluency. Here's the revised version:

Dear Sir/Madam,

1. I am writing regarding your editorial from last Thursday's newspaper. I wholeheartedly agree with the points raised in this editorial.

2. In my opinion, today's teenagers are increasingly relying on gadgets rather than actively engaging their memory and intellect. The lack of mental exercise adversely affects their cognitive abilities, which does not contribute to their intelligence. Consequently, IQ scores are decreasing rather than increasing.

3. Personally, I believe that the genuine issue lies in the fact that contemporary teenagers seldom engage in outdoor activities and get insufficient sleep. The schedules of modern teenagers are rigorously filled with various extracurricular activities, tutoring sessions, and clubs. In the past, children used to socialize more and spend more time outdoors. The lack of fresh air and adequate rest has negative consequences on their health. Sleep has a healing effect, during which the brain processes the information gathered throughout the day, including the negative aspects. It's no wonder they say, "The morning is wiser than the evening." An active daily walk can also help improve memory and maintain good health.

4. I feel deeply concerned about this matter. I am eager to hear the opinions of other readers.

Yours faithfully, Robert Dean