Question

Здравствуйте! Проверьте , пожалуйста, на наличие ошибок: Many people in our world learn foreign languages. It's really important for communication with each other and friendship of peoples. I think, that lots of people learn languages, because they understand importance of communication and diplomacy for peaceful world. As for me, I have chosen to do the English exam this year, because I really want to improve the level of my English. I think, exam helped me very mich. So, I watched the films in English, read English books and, of course, I worked with my English-teacher using textbooks. In conclusion I want to say, that everybody must learn foreign languages for our successful and peaceful future.

Answer 1

3 абзац не i think exam helped а i think exam will have(или если не уверен might help)

Answer 2

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Many people in our world learn foreign languages. It's really important for communication with each other and the fostering of friendships among peoples. I think that lots of people learn languages because they understand the importance of communication and diplomacy for a peaceful world. As for me, I have chosen to take the English exam this year because I truly want to improve my English skills. I believe the exam has helped me greatly. Therefore, I've been watching films in English, reading English books, and, of course, working with my English teacher using textbooks. In conclusion, I want to emphasize that everybody should learn foreign languages for the sake of our successful and peaceful future.