Question

Правильно ли написана фраза? It seems that you have fatigue and eye strain due to the fact that you work for a long time at the computer.

Answer 1

Верно, немного официально звучит, но грамматически правильно

Answer 2

Да всё верно без ошибочно

Answer 3

The phrase you provided is almost correct, but it can be improved for better clarity and flow. Here's a revised version:

"It seems that you are experiencing fatigue and eye strain because of working for extended periods at the computer."

In this revised version, I made the following changes:

1. "You have" changed to "you are experiencing" to make it more descriptive.
2. "Due to the fact that" changed to "because of" to make the sentence more concise.
3. "Work for a long time" changed to "working for extended periods" to sound more natural and less repetitive.

Now the sentence is clearer and reads more smoothly.