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Проверьте, пожалуйста, правильность написания текста) Hello! Today I would like to tell you about two famous people which are in the news at the moment. They are Dorofeeva and Monatik. News are talking about them now because they have recently made a new video clip for the song "Deep". So they catches many eyes because they have not sung together before. Besides, the clip was made in Paris. It is very bright and beautiful. Also, celebrities amazed their fans with their wonderful dance. The song with dance rhythms becames popular very quickly.

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Hello! Today I would like to tell you about two famous people who are in the news at the moment. They are Dorofeeva and Monatik. Reporters are talking about them now, because they have recently made a new video clip for the song "Deep". Many people are following in love with their music as they have not sung together before. Besides, the clip was made in Paris. It is very bright and beautiful. Additionally, the celebrities amazed their fans with their wonderful choreography. The song become vast popular, because of its music, lyrics and dance.

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Привет! Сегодня я хочу рассказать вам о двух известных людях, которые сейчас в центре внимания новостей. Это Дорофеева и Монатик. О них сейчас говорят в новостях, потому что недавно они выпустили новый видеоклип на песню "Deep". Они привлекают много внимания, так как раньше они не пели вместе. Кроме того, клип был снят в Париже. Он очень яркий и красивый. Кроме того, знаменитости поразили своих поклонников прекрасным танцем. Песня с танцевальными ритмами стала очень популярной очень быстро.