Question

ПРОВЕРЬТЕ ТЕКСТ НА НАЛИЧИЕ ОШИБОК (только знающие), даю много баллов. Dear Jane, Thanks a lot for your letter. My birthday was in August. I turned 12 year sold. I had a big birthday party. I invited a lot of friends. On the birthday we played, danced, had fun while my Mother was cutting cake. I got a lot of presents includes Board games a lot of sweets and other presents. My birthday was very good and had fun. I think that my birthday is one of the Best days in a year

Answer 1

Не sold - old
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Answer 2

Пиши какого числа,а то письмо будет не понятным-это первое.

А так все правильно

Answer 3

Dear Jane,

Thank you for your letter. My birthday was in August, and I turned 12 years old. I had a big birthday party where I invited many friends. During the party, we played, danced, and had fun while my Mother was cutting the cake. I received a lot of presents, including board games, lots of sweets, and other gifts. My birthday was very enjoyable and fun. I think that my birthday is one of the best days of the year.

Please note that the following corrections have been made:

1. "year sold" changed to "years old."
2. "includes" changed to "including."
3. "had fun" is duplicated, so one of them is removed.
4. "Best" changed to "best" (capitalize "best" since it's the start of the sentence).

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