Question

Уважаемые знатоки английского языка, проверьте, пожалуйста, правильность перевода моего сочинения. My name is Sabir. I'll tell you about my family castle. Our family is not very big. The queen of the castle is my mother. I am the Prince of the castle. And the princess of the castle is my sister. A scared sister married a prince from another karolevstva and lives with him. My mother keeps our castle in good condition. Our fortress withstands any enemy attacks. My sister likes to sit in her room and guess through the magic mirror. And I'm learning to ride a horse and I could use the sword. I dream of fighting the dragon in the future. In our castle there are many different portraits, statues and secret rooms. Many things have been preserved since our grandmothers and grandfathers. We always like to dine together. At the table we always have a lot of different food. I love my castle and my family.

Answer 1

"My name is Sabir. I'll tell you about my family castle. Our family is not very big. The queen of the castle is my mother. I am the Prince of the castle. And the princess of the castle is my sister. A scared sister married a prince from another kingdoms and lives with him. My mother keeps our castle in good condition. Our fortress withstands any enemy attacks. My sister likes to sit in her room and guess through the magic mirror. And I'm learning to ride a horse and I could use the sword. I dream of fighting the dragon in the future. In our castle there are many different portraits, statues and secret rooms. Many things have been preserved since our grandmothers and grandfathers. We always like to dine together. At the table we always have a lot of different food. I love my castle and my family."

Answer 2

Your translation is mostly accurate, but there are a few corrections and improvements that can be made. Here's the revised version:

"My name is Sabir, and I would like to tell you about my family's castle. Our family isn't very large. The queen of the castle is my mother. I am the prince of the castle, and my sister is the princess. My beloved sister married a prince from another kingdom and now resides with him.

My mother takes great care of our castle, ensuring it remains in excellent condition. Our fortress can withstand any enemy attacks. Meanwhile, my sister enjoys spending time in her room, where she likes to gaze into a magical mirror and make predictions. As for me, I'm learning to ride horses and wield a sword. In the future, I dream of battling a dragon.

Inside our castle, you'll find numerous portraits, statues, and secret rooms. Many of these treasures have been passed down through generations, preserved by our ancestors. We always cherish the opportunity to dine together as a family. Our table is filled with a variety of delicious dishes.

I hold immense love for my castle and my family."

Note: I made a few changes to improve the flow and clarity of the text. Also, "karolevstva" is not a recognized English word, so I replaced it with "kingdom."