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Нужна помощь в поиске ошибках в тексте(Ниже) Hello, my name is Clim. I am 16 years old. My favorite occupation is playing chess. I have a big family. I spend my time with my family. I have many sisters, and there are no brothers. It's a pity that I have brothers ... My sister Dasha is 8 years old. Dasha can draw and sing. Lisa is my second sister. Lisa is older than me for 1 year. Also loves to draw and sing. OLYA my worst terrible sister lives in Kiev. My text is bored. In conclusion, I can say that you always need to maintain good relations with my relatives. We do not know what will happen tomorrow.

Answer 1

Hello, my name is Klim. I am 16 years old. My favourite activity is playing chess. I have a big family. I spend my free time with my family. I have many sisters but I have no brothers. My sister Dasha is 8 years old. Dasha can draw and sing. Lisa is my second sister. Lisa is one year older than me. She also loves drawing and singing. Olya is my sister,she lives in Kiev. My text is boring. In conclusion, I can say that it is necessary to have good relations with your relatives and family. . We do not know what will happen tomorrow.

Answer 2

Hello, my name is Clim. I am 16 years old. My favorite occupation is playing chess. I have a big family. I spend my time with my family. I have many sisters, and there are no brothers. It's a pity that I have no brothers... My sister Dasha is 8 years old. Dasha can draw and sing. Lisa is my second sister. Lisa is older than me by 1 year. She also loves to draw and sing. Olya, my worst terrible sister, lives in Kiev. My text is boring. In conclusion, I can say that you always need to maintain good relations with your relatives. We do not know what will happen tomorrow.

Here are the corrected errors:

• "It's a pity that I have brothers" should be "It's a pity that I have no brothers."
• "Lisa is older than me for 1 year" should be "Lisa is older than me by 1 year."
• "OLYA my worst terrible sister lives in Kiev" should be "Olya, my worst terrible sister, lives in Kiev."
• "My text is bored" should be "My text is boring."
• "you always need to maintain good relations with my relatives" should be "you always need to maintain good relations with your relatives."

I hope this helps! Let me know if you have any more questions.