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Пожалуйста проверьте этот текст на ошибки. The last time we traveled in Murmansk. I was there in winter, in February. On the trip with me was my dad . I saw one tourist attraction of Murmansk - a monument to Alyosha. The weather was overcast the whole sky was covered with clouds and it was raining. We went to Murmansk to the dentist. I was in the water Park . There was a lot of fun. I went to see my friend Denis and his aunt Nina. I especially liked the fact that I finally saw my best friend Denis. there was only one drawback from our trip. the weather was bad.

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"The last time we traveled was to Murmansk. It was in winter, in February. My dad came with me on the trip. While there, I visited one of Murmansk's tourist attractions - the monument to Alyosha. The weather was overcast, and the entire sky was covered with clouds. It was also raining during our visit. We went to Murmansk for a dental appointment, and I also got to visit the water park, which was a lot of fun. During our trip, I also met up with my friend Denis and his aunt Nina. Seeing my best friend Denis was the highlight of the trip. However, the only drawback was the bad weather."