Question

Проверьте нет ли ошибок в тексте котором я написала. Dear Daria Dmitrievna, thank a lot for your letter. I'd like to write you about my flat. There are three rooms in flat and a kitchen a bathroom a restroom. In the living room there is a big sofa and there are armchairs. There is a small beautiful carpet on the floor, and there are pictures on the wall. In my room there is a big bed, a desk is near the Window. When I do my homework. There is a comfortable chair near the desk. I like my flat very much. Its very good comfortable and cosy

Answer 1

У тебя всё хорошо, ошибок нет.

Только в последнем предложении точку поставь.

Answer 2

Dear Daria Dmitrievna, thank you a lot for your letter. I'd like to write to you about my flat. There are three rooms in the flat, a kitchen, a bathroom, and a restroom. In the living room, there is a big sofa and some armchairs. On the floor, there is a small, beautiful carpet, and on the walls, there are pictures. In my room, there is a big bed, and near the window, there is a desk. I do my homework there, and there is a comfortable chair next to the desk. I really like my flat. It's very good, comfortable, and cozy.

Note: I made a few corrections for clarity and grammar in your text. Overall, it looks good now.