Question

Найдите грамматические ошибки в сочинении. Сама написала сочинение. Прошу вас, если есть ошибки, исправить и указать верный вариант.One winter evening very strong wind blew.  Miller stayed at home, and slept in a chair.  From a wind the window at which there was a lamp opened.  The lamp fell to a floor and lit up.  The fire began.  Miller's all family ran out from the house, having taken with itself only a little food. The fire ended. -  Repair is necessary to our house.  Where we will live now? - We can live at Hans. After all he is our friend. It will shelter us.Miller's family came into Hans's house. Meanwhile Small Hans tried to be warmed at the furnace.- We have a trouble! - compassionately Miller told. - The friend, you not against, what I and my family we will live at you?- Certainly! I am glad you to see! Live how many you will wish!Next day Miller early woke Hans.- Hans, give a breakfast.Hans brought a few nuts.- It everything? Bring something else.- Forgive, Miller, but I have no food any more...All winter Miller and Hans lived in poverty.  Miller understood how it was heavy to live to Hans. In the spring Miller built the house anew. It was helped by Hans. Now Miller really appreciated the friend and shared with all of them a crop as Hans once shared.

Answer 1

У тебя всё правильно но только одна ошибка.7 стока там у тебя написано Hans's а надо просто Hans 

Answer 2

Вот исправленная версия вашего сочинения с грамматическими исправлениями:

One winter evening, a very strong wind blew. Miller stayed at home and slept in a chair. The wind blew open the window where a lamp was placed. The lamp fell to the floor and started a fire. Miller's entire family ran out of the house, taking only a little food with them. The fire eventually stopped. "Our house needs repairs. Where will we live now?" asked Miller. "We can live at Hans' place. After all, he is our friend. He will shelter us."

Miller's family went to Hans' house. Meanwhile, Small Hans tried to warm himself by the furnace. "We are in trouble!" compassionately said Miller. "Friend, do you mind if my family and I live with you?" "Of course not! I'm glad to see you! Stay as long as you wish!"

The next day, Miller woke Hans up early. "Hans, let's have breakfast." Hans brought a few nuts. "Is that all? Bring something else." "I'm sorry, Miller, but I have no more food."

Throughout the winter, Miller and Hans lived in poverty. Miller understood how difficult it was for Hans to live like that. In the spring, Miller built a new house with the help of Hans. Now Miller truly appreciated his friend and shared the harvest with him, just as Hans once shared with them.