Question

Отредактируйте предложения.1. В речи абитуриент употребляет диалектные и областные слова. 2. В институте сложилась сложная ситуация. 3. Каждый герой имеет свои индивидуальные черты. 4. Дети стали разыскивать дорогу домой. 5. Сколько платий ты возьмешь на дачу.

Answer 1

В речи абитуриент употребляет областные диалектные слова(Областные и диалектные в данном случае синонимы), В данном случае можно употребить одно из слов). В институте сложилась трудная ситуация(сложилась сложная в предложении звучит, как тавтология, совершенствуем, заменяя сложную на критическую или трудную).Каждый из героев имеет свои индивидуальные черты.(в данном случае(каждый ИЗ отделяет одно слово от другого, становится понятнее о чём речь, существительное - герой ставим во мн.числе).Дети стали искать дорогу домой.(разыскивают частные детективы или собаки, они в розыск поиск дома не заявляли, чтобы его разыскивали). Сколько платьев ты возьмёшь на дачу?(нет слова платий, от слова платье, мн.ч-платьев)

Answer 2

1. В речи абитуриент употребляет диалектные  слова. 2. В институте сложилась трудная ситуация. 3. Каждый герой имеет свои индивидуальные черты. 4.Дети искали дорогу домой. 5. Сколько платьев ты возьмешь на дачу.?

Answer 3

Answer in detail. Edit the sentences.

1. In his speech, the applicant uses dialectal and regional words. - This sentence is grammatically correct, but it could be improved by specifying which dialect and region the applicant belongs to, or what effect his word choice has on his speech. For example:

- In his speech, the applicant uses words from the Siberian dialect, which makes him sound more authentic and sincere. - In his speech, the applicant uses words typical of the Moscow region, which reveals his urban background and education.

2. A complex situation has arisen at the institute. - This sentence is too vague and does not explain what kind of situation it is, why it is complex, and how it affects the institute. A better sentence would provide more details and context. For example:

- A complex situation has arisen at the institute due to the sudden resignation of the director and the lack of a clear successor. - A complex situation has arisen at the institute as the students have organized a strike to protest against the new curriculum and the low quality of teaching.

3. Each character has his own individual traits. - This sentence is redundant and does not convey any specific information about the characters. The word "individual" is unnecessary, as it is implied by the word "own". A more informative sentence would describe some of the traits of the characters or how they differ from each other. For example:

- Each character has distinctive traits that make them memorable and realistic. - Each character has different traits that reflect their personality and role in the story.

4. The children began to look for the way home. - This sentence is correct, but it could be more expressive and vivid by using more descriptive words or adding some details. For example:

- The children started to search for the way home, feeling lost and scared in the dark forest. - The children eagerly looked for the way home, hoping to see their parents and friends soon.

5. How many dresses will you take to the cottage? - This sentence is fine, but it could be more polite and friendly by using a modal verb or a question word. For example:

- How many dresses would you like to take to the cottage? - How many dresses do you need to take to the cottage?