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Правильно ли написано? My friend and I met at a music school when I was about 10. She came to my teacher's class, although that I didn’t communicate with her for the first year and a half, because our piano lessons didn’t overlap. The first time we started chatting in solfeggio when I was eleven. I didn't like solfeggio, didn't do my homework and didn't know the theory well enough, so when there were any test works I sat down with her because she was one of the best solfeggio theorist.After I began to sit with her regularly, and not just on tests.Over time, while I was sitting with her, we found many common interests and hobbies, for example, drawing. I was an amateur artist and Varya went to a art school,so we very quickly found a common language.over time, our lessons shifted and we began to play in the ensemble, which united us even more, so even after I left school we did not stop communicating.​

Answer 1

Ваш текст в основном правильный, но есть несколько моментов, которые можно улучшить для большей ясности и грамматической корректности. Вот исправленный вариант:

"My friend and I met at a music school when I was about 10. She joined my teacher's class, although I didn’t communicate with her for the first year and a half because our piano lessons didn’t overlap. The first time we started chatting was during solfeggio when I was eleven. I didn't enjoy solfeggio, didn't do my homework, and didn't know the theory well enough. So, when there were any test works, I sat down with her because she was one of the best solfeggio theorists.

After I began to sit with her regularly, not just on tests, we discovered many common interests and hobbies, such as drawing. I was an amateur artist, and Varya went to an art school, so we quickly found a common language. Over time, our lessons shifted, and we started playing in the ensemble, which brought us even closer. Even after I left school, we did not stop communicating."