Question

My favorite famous person is Billie Eilish. Billie was born on the eighteenth of December, 2001. Was born in Los Angeles, California, America. She has one brother, his name is Finneas. By profession, Billie Eilish is a singer and a songwriter. She's great. Проверьте текст и исправьте ошибки, пожалуйста!

Answer 1

Все замечательно, ошибок нет)

Answer 2

Ваш текст о Билли Айлиш в целом верен, но есть несколько моментов, которые можно улучшить. Вот исправленный вариант:

"My favorite famous person is Billie Eilish. Billie was born on the eighteenth of December, 2001, in Los Angeles, California, USA. She has one brother, and his name is Finneas. By profession, Billie Eilish is a singer and songwriter. She is truly amazing."