Question

Найдите ошибки пожалуйста Dear Lucy. Hello . I hope you are fine . I am writing this letter to say a few words about what I love to do in your spare time . I like to go to the movies with friends . I can not say . that regularly go to the movies , but if I have a chance to go to the movies , I do it . when the weather is inclement , I prefer to play computer games . Of course you can say that this is a crazy idea to play computer games , but for me this is the best way to relax after a hard day . I have some exciting games and even dad joins me in the evenings. I heard that you got a role in the school play . my congratulations to you. what kind of performance . what role you will play . and when will this play . That's all . I hope you invite me for the presentation and write a few lines

Answer 1

1.I like going to the movies with friends, вместо I like to go to the movies with friends 
2.I am writing this letter to tell you about what I do in my spare time лучше так, чем I am writing this letter to say a few words about what I love to do in your spare time. Хотя и так неплохо. 
3.I have some exciting games and even dad joins me in the evenings to play with me. Лучше так, иначе теряется смысл. 
А вот последние предложения я хз, не пойму что, где стоит, где запятые и тд.. Хотя бы текст нормально залила. 

Answer 2

Dear Lucy,

Hello! I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to tell you about some of the things I enjoy doing in my spare time. One of my favorite activities is going to the movies with friends. I must admit that I don't go regularly, but whenever I get the chance, I definitely take it.

On days when the weather is bad, I prefer to stay indoors and play computer games. Some might think it's a crazy idea, but for me, it's the best way to relax after a hard day. I have some exciting games, and even my dad joins me in the evenings. It's a fun way for us to bond and unwind.

I heard the exciting news that you got a role in the school play. Congratulations! I'm really happy for you. I'm curious to know what kind of performance it is and what role you will be playing. Also, I would like to know when the play will take place. It would mean a lot to me if you could invite me to the presentation. I would love to come and support you. Please write a few lines about it.

Thank you, Lucy, and I hope to hear from you soon.

Warm regards, [Your Name]