Question

Прошу проверьте рассказ по английскому,помогите, очень срочно. One day we were building part of the station. Then the Station Supervisor was called on the radio from the Satellite Control Office. He was told that a small satellite was coming towards us. He climbed into his spacesuit and soon he was in space. Sometimelater, we switched on the radio and heard: " Help! I am in trouble! Did this spasesuit belong to...". We took out binoculars and looked at the sky. The spacemen fainted and fell down. Then we made him to the space station.

Answer 1

После told мы не можем использовать that, нужно использовать местоимение вместо that. 
He was told... Ты уверена, что здесь нужен passive?
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После say мы можем использовать that, а после tell не можем.