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Помогите исправить ошибки в тексте 1)Saransk is a small town in Russia. There is nothing special. When I come back from another city in Saransk I do not want to live. Terrible architecture hurts the eyes. For example a new post office without tears will not look. 2)In Saransk there is nothing remarkable, ordinary provincial town that is trying to get better. The only thing that you can accept this Cathedral which was built near the shopping center, it looks pathetic. 3)Saransk is located in the Volga basin at the confluence of the Saranka and Insar Rivers, about 630 kilometers east of Moscow. Population: 297,415 (2010 Census). The city has a public transport. He is represented by buses, trolleybuses and private buses. As for the roads in some places they can be good, others bad. 4)The city is divided into three urban areas: 1) Lenin (104 676]), 2) October (99 552]),3) Proletarian (94 967). In addition, there is an informal division into four major residential areas: Center, Khimmash, Svetotehstroy and Southwest. Centre more or less well maintained, but it has a terrible architecture. Areas as in the rest Russia - full of gray five-story houses. Almost all the people living in these homes. 5)Usually people go for a walk in the Pushkin Park and the central square. In recent years, the popularity gained Millennium Square. Teenagers love to sit in shopping malls. The city has theaters and museums, but young people prefer to go to nightclubs, anti cafes, cinemas. The city was recently built McDonald's. Now this is the main attraction of the city. 6)Work in the city is different.. Most people are working on the budget enterprises. I see a lot of janitors and photographers. The city has several universities and vocational schools. The coolest university in Saransk – N.P. Ogarev's Mordovian State University. There goes the urban elite. People say that there is a good education, I do not know. 7)I would not recommend the city to tourists such cities in Russia very much. There is nothing special. There are a couple of nice buildings in the center, and that's it. If tourists come, they usually look square and go eat at McDonald's. Live here as well as in other Russian cities. So I think the newcomers are not surprised and quickly become accustomed. It may seem that I say bad things about the city. But this is only my opinion. I love my city and its disadvantages.

Answer 1

1)Saransk is a small town in Russia. There is nothing special. When I come back to Saransk from another city  I do not want to live. Terrible architecture hurts the eyes. For example, I can't look at a new post office without tears .
2)In Saransk there is nothing remarkable, an ordinary provincial town that is trying to get better. The only thing that you can accept is a Cathedral which was built near the shopping center, but nevertheless it looks pathetic too. 
3)Saransk is located in the Volga basin at the confluence of the Saranka and Insar Rivers, about 630 kilometers east of Moscow. Population: 297,415 (2010 Census). The city has public transportation. It is represented by buses, trolleybuses and private buses. As for the roads, in some places they can be good, others bad. 
4)The city is divided into three urban areas:
1) Lenin (104 676]), 2) October (99 552]),3) Proletarian (94 967).
In addition, there is an informal division into four major residential areas: Center, Khimmash, Svetotehstroy and Southwest. The downtown is more or less well maintained, but it has terrible architecture. Areas are as in the rest of Russia - full of gray five-story houses. Almost all the people live in these homes. 
5)Usually people go for a walk in the Pushkin Park and the central square. In recent years, the Millennium Square gained  the popularity . Teenagers love to sit in shopping malls. The city has theaters and museums, but young people prefer to go to nightclubs, cafes, cinemas. The city recently built McDonald's. Now this is the main attraction of the city. 
6)Work in the city is different.. Most people  work in the budget enterprises. I see a lot of janitors and photographers. The city has several universities and vocational schools. The coolest university in Saransk – N.P. Ogarev's Mordovian State University. There goes the urban elite. People say that there is a good education, I do not know. 
7)I would not recommend the city and such cities in Russia to tourists  very much. There is nothing special. There are a couple of nice buildings in the center, and that's it. If tourists come, they usually look at the squares and go eat at McDonald's. Life here is boring as well as in other Russian cities. So I think the newcomers are not surprised and quickly become accustomed. It may seem that I say bad things about the city. But this is only my opinion. I love my city and its disadvantages.

Answer 2

1) Saransk is a small town in Russia. There is nothing special about it. When I come back from another city to Saransk, I do not want to live there. The terrible architecture hurts the eyes. For example, the new post office looks unattractive.

2) In Saransk, there is nothing remarkable, just an ordinary provincial town that is trying to improve. The only thing that can be considered acceptable is the Cathedral, which was built near the shopping center, but even that looks pathetic.

3) Saransk is located in the Volga basin at the confluence of the Saranka and Insar Rivers, about 630 kilometers east of Moscow. According to the 2010 Census, the population is 297,415. The city has public transportation, including buses, trolleybuses, and private buses. However, the condition of the roads varies, with some being good and others being bad.

4) The city is divided into three urban areas: Lenin (104,676 residents), October (99,552 residents), and Proletarian (94,967 residents). Additionally, there is an informal division into four major residential areas: Center, Khimmash, Svetotehstroy, and Southwest. The city center is relatively well-maintained, but it suffers from terrible architecture. The other areas are similar to the rest of Russia, with gray five-story houses and most people living in these homes.

5) People usually go for walks in Pushkin Park and the central square. In recent years, Millennium Square has gained popularity. Teenagers enjoy spending time in shopping malls. The city also has theaters and museums, but young people prefer going to nightclubs, anti-cafes, and cinemas. The recent addition of McDonald's has made it a popular attraction in the city.

6) The job market in the city is diverse. Most people work in budget enterprises. I see a lot of janitors and photographers. Saransk is home to several universities and vocational schools. The most prestigious university in Saransk is N.P. Ogarev's Mordovian State University, which attracts the urban elite. People say that the education there is good, but I cannot personally confirm it.

7) I would not highly recommend Saransk to tourists, as there is nothing particularly special about it. There are a couple of nice buildings in the city center, but that's about it. If tourists visit, they usually just visit the central square and eat at McDonald's. Living in Saransk is similar to living in other Russian cities. Therefore, newcomers are not usually surprised and quickly adapt. It may seem like I am speaking negatively about the city, but this is just my personal opinion. I love my city despite its disadvantages.