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Отредактируйте пожалуйста маленький текст! With Alina we met during my summer vacation. We were introduced by my sister during one of the festivals. We immediately became close friends. Communicated every day. She is average height, long dark brown hair. Her eyes are a very pretty blue.She wears light makeup and fashionable clothes. She is supportive and knows how to encourage people then they are feeling down. Alina never discouraged. She often tells funny and instructive stories. With her is never boring. I'm glad I'm friends with her.

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I have met Alina during my summer vacation. We were introduced to each other by my sister during one of the festivals. We immediately became close friends and communicated every day. She has average height, long dark brown hair, beautiful blue eyes. She wears light makeup and fashionable clothes. She is supportive and she knows how to cheer up people who they are sad and moody. Alina is never discouraged. She often tells funny and exciting stories. You will never be bored with her. I'm glad we are friends.

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With Alina we met during my summer vacation. We were introduced by my sister during one of the festivals. We immediately became close friends. Communicated every day. She is average height, long dark brown hair. Her eyes are a very pretty blue.She wears light makeup and fashionable clothes. She is supportive and knows how to encourage people then they are feeling down. Alina never discouraged. She often tells funny and instructive stories. With her is never boring. I'm glad I'm friends with her.

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I met Alina during my summer vacation. My sister introduced us at one of the festivals. We became close friends right away. We talked every day. She has long dark brown hair and average height. Her eyes are a very beautiful blue. She wears light makeup and stylish clothes. She is supportive and knows how to cheer people up when they are feeling down. Alina is never discouraged. She often tells funny and instructive stories. It is never boring with her. I'm happy to be friends with her.