Question

Проверьте пожалуйста мое сочинение по английскому на тему Мое Хобби. Помогите, как закончить? My hobby is singing. I started singing almost from birth.my parents said that when I was almost 1 years old they were giving me pencils and paper for drawing but I was banging rhytm of the music which I heard lately. Because of it my parents enrolled me on vocal when I was 4 years old. I like it because I can do it very well anyway my teachers say it. I have good aural skills from nature and I just like it! Usually I sing pop music or just something melodic. --- Мое хобби - пение. Я начала петь почти с рождения. Мои родители говорят что когда мне было почти год, когда они давали мне карандаши и бумагу для рисования, я стучала ритм музыки, которую я слышала в последний раз. И поэтому мои родители записали меня на вокал когда мне было 4. Мне это нравится потому что это у меня получается очень даже хорошо, ну по крайней мере так говорят мои учителя. У меня хороший музыкальный слух от природы и я просто люблю это! Обычно я пою поп музыку или просто что то мелодичное.

Answer 1

When I was almost 1 year old - в ед. числе. В этом же предложении, если уж "мои родители говоряТ", тогда "My parents say". Далее, здесь же, не думаю что надо использовать прошлое продолженное.
либо так если используем when,
My parents say that when I was almost 1 year old when they gave me pencils and paper for drawing,
I was banging rhytm of the music which I heard lately.
либо так, если не используем:
My parents say that when I was almost 1 year old they gave me pencils and paper for drawing but I banged rhytm of the music which I heard lately.
Because of it - лучше That's why.
I like it because I can do it very well anyway my teachers say it. Это лучше разделить на 2: I like it because I can do it very well. At least my teachers say it.

Ещё подумаю, наверняка не всё))

Answer 2

My hobby is singing, and I have been doing it almost since birth. According to my parents, when I was around one year old, they would give me pencils and paper for drawing, but instead of drawing, I would start banging rhythmically to the music I heard. This caught my parents' attention, and they decided to enroll me in vocal lessons when I turned four.

I truly enjoy singing because I believe I am good at it, and my teachers also praise my skills. I have been blessed with natural aural abilities, and it brings me immense joy to express myself through music. I mostly sing pop music or any melodic songs that resonate with me.

Singing has become an integral part of my life. It allows me to unleash my emotions, connect with others, and express my creativity. Whenever I sing, I feel a sense of freedom and fulfillment. It is like a form of therapy for me, helping me to relax and relieve stress.

Moreover, singing has also provided me with numerous opportunities. I have participated in various school competitions, talent shows, and even performed at local events. These experiences have boosted my confidence and allowed me to showcase my talent to a wider audience.

In the future, I aspire to continue developing my singing skills and perhaps pursue it professionally. I dream of recording my own music, performing on bigger stages, and touching people's hearts through my voice.

To conclude, singing is not just a hobby for me; it is my passion and a significant part of who I am. It brings me endless joy, allows me to express myself, and provides me with numerous opportunities. I am grateful for the support of my parents and teachers who have encouraged me to pursue my love for singing.