Question

Прошу помочь с проверкой письма по английскому языку! ( четвертной контроль)!!! Может можно как-то сказать лучше, или времена напутала, грамматические и пунктационные ошибки(( Moscow Russia 13 May 2015 Dear Liz, Thanks a lot for your letter. Sorry haven't written for so long. You asked me about my summer holidays. Well, in June I will celebrate my birthday! Then me and my litlle brother are going to visit our grandma. In July and August me and my family will be visiting our summer Cottage . But I'm not sure, I expect it's true. Okay, and what about you? By the way, I remember in your last letter You wrote me about a very Big book. Have you read this book? Is it interesting? Do You like this book? Take care and keep in touch With best wishes, Julia

Answer 1

Мне кажется что число пишится так: The 13th of May

Answer 2

Dear Liz,

Thank you very much for your letter. I apologize for not having written for so long. You inquired about my summer holidays. Well, in June, I will be celebrating my birthday! After that, my little brother and I are planning to visit our grandma. In July and August, my family and I will be spending time at our summer cottage. However, I am not entirely sure about these plans; I believe they are tentative.

What about you? By the way, I recall from your last letter that you mentioned a very large book. Have you read it? Is it interesting? Do you like it?

Take care and keep in touch.

Best wishes, Julia

Please note that the original text contains several grammatical and punctuation errors, including capitalization of "You" and "With" which should not be capitalized, and some missing articles and prepositions. I have made the necessary corrections to improve the overall flow and accuracy of the letter.