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проверить ошибки.hello. people do not subjugated power of nature. so I want to tell you about the unfortunate case that happened to me last week. I with my friend were at home when began earthquake . We were very afraid. glass flew from the windows. dishes fell from shelves. light was turned off. outside resounded loud and terrified screams. we understood that not be able to come out quickly and safely. Then we decided to find a safe place in the house.after a few minutes all was quiet. we were able to get out on outside and call for help, because we saw a wounded woman. but suddenly a second wave of earthquakes began all began to worry more. but fortunately earthquake quickly stopped. we have lived to the ambulance and helped the woman. well that all have passed without serious consequences. I wish that this event was no more.

Answer 1

Hello. People haven't subjugated the power of nature. - Людинепокорилисилыприроды. (don't не подходит, потому что это обычное-повседневное действие, а тут смысл в том, что не покорилась природа человеку - Perfect, я думаю)

So I want to tell you about the unfortunate case that happened with me last week.- Поэтому я хочу рассказать вам о несчастном случае, который произошел со мной на прошлой неделе.

My friend and I were at home when earthquake began. (именно в таком порядке: мой друг и я) - Мы с другом были дома, когда началось землетрясение.

We were very afraid. - Мы очень испугались.

Glass flew out the windows. - Стекла вылетели из окон.

Plates and cups fell from the shelves.- Тарелки и чашки падали с полок.

Electricity was turned off. - Электричество было отключено (отключилось).

Loud and terrified screams were resounded outside. - Громкие и испуганные крики доносились с улицы (раздавались на улице)

We found out that we couldn't come out quickly and safely. - Мы поняли, что мы не можем выйти быстро и безопасно. (можно было оставить и слово understood, но find out лексически подходит лучше)

Then we decided to find a safe place in the house. - Тогда мы решили найти безопасное место в доме.

In a few minutes everything was quiet. - Через несколько минут все было спокойно (тихо).

We could get out  and call for help, because we saw a wounded woman. - Мы смогли выйти на улицу и позвать на помощь, потому что мы увидели раненую женщину. (нельзя брать were able - be able только для будущего времени)

But suddenly a second wave of earthquake came. - Но вдруг пришла вторая волна землетрясения.

Everybody began to worry once more. - Все снова забеспокоились (как-то сильно по-русски)

But fortunately earthquake was quickly over. - Но, к счастью, землетрясение быстро закончилось.

We called an ambulance and helped the woman. - Мы вызвали скорую помощь и помогли женщине.

Well, everything has passed without serious consequences.- Хорошо, что все прошло без серьезных последствий.

I wish that this event wouldn't repeat again. - Я хочу, чтобы такое событие больше не повторилось

Answer 2

Hello,

I would like to share with you a detailed account of the unfortunate incident that occurred to me last week, highlighting how people cannot subjugate the power of nature. It was a terrifying experience that left me and my friend shaken.

It all started when we were at home, going about our day, completely unaware of the impending danger. Suddenly, an earthquake struck with immense force. The ground beneath us trembled violently, causing fear to grip our hearts. As the earthquake intensified, we could hear the sound of breaking glass as it flew from the windows, and dishes fell from the shelves, shattering into pieces. The power supply was disrupted, plunging us into darkness.

Outside, the air was filled with loud and terrified screams, echoing the panic that had taken hold of everyone. We realized that we wouldn't be able to escape quickly and safely. In that moment, we made the difficult decision to find a safe place within the house, hoping it would protect us from the destructive forces of nature.

After what felt like an eternity, the shaking subsided,