Question

Проверьте пожалуйста! In our country we have got different types of education: primary, secondary and higher education. I have passed these three steps of education. I started my state primary school, when I was seven and went to there until I was ten. Then I went to a secondary school and left it when I was seventeen. After finishing the 11th grade, I passed the EGE and are then awarded a Certificate of Complete Secondary Education (ATTESTAT) in July. Now I entered the university «RANEPA». I’m in my second year at the University so I’m a sophomore. I study full-time and pay for tuition fee. I live in a home because I come from Moscow, but some students rented accommodation. After I graduated from university, I get a Bachelor's degree. In winter at the end of the term we are going to take exams. After that we are going to have winter holidays.

Answer 1

I started my state primary school, when I was seven and went to there - went there правильно, без предлога
until I was - until I became лучше
I passed the EGE and are then - лишнее слово
I study full-time and pay for tuition fee - лишний предлог
I live in a home because I come from Moscow - I live at home because I am from Moscow
but some students rented accommodation - rent. прошедшее время тут неуместно
After I graduated from university, I get a Bachelor's degree - When I graduate from the University I will get a Bachelor's degree
After that we are going to have winter holidays. - здесь лучше взять конструкцию будущего времени we will have

Answer 2

In our country, there are different types of education: primary, secondary, and higher education. The primary education typically starts at the age of seven and lasts until the age of ten After completing primary education, students move on to secondary school, which usually lasts until the age of seventeen [[1]](https://quizlet.com/682898425/english-words-4-flash-cards/). At the end of the 11th grade in secondary school, students take the Unified State Exam (EGE) [[1]](https://quizlet.com/682898425/english-words-4-flash-cards/). Upon passing the EGE, students are awarded a Certificate of Complete Secondary Education (ATTESTAT) in July.

After completing secondary education, some students choose to pursue higher education at a university. For example, the user mentioned that they entered the university "RANEPA" and are currently in their second year, making them a sophomore They study full-time and pay tuition fees. While the user mentioned that they live at home because they come from Moscow, some students choose to rent accommodation near the university.

Upon graduating from university, students can obtain a Bachelor's degree The user mentioned that after winter exams, they will have winter holidays.

Please note that the information provided is based on general knowledge about education systems and may not reflect the specific details of the user's country or institution. It is always best to consult official sources or the specific educational institution for accurate and up-to-date information.