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Срочно Проверьте грамматику и орфографию,если есть ошибки,исправьте. I want you to think about your career like a surfer. Now, what I mean by that is when you're a surfer sitting on a surfboard, you've got three choices. How to handle a wave. One of them, you can sit on your board and let that wave go right underneath you and you'll miss all the excitement that happens after that is it turns into a big swell and into a big wave. The second choice, get a little excited, get out over your board, paddle too fast, get in front of that wave, and you can absolutely get crushed and not very fun. Look, the third choice. It's to paddle your board at the speed of that wave and to get into the curl and ride that curl for the ride of your life. I've done the third wave, and I could tell you early works in my career where I had a chance to grow with the company at the same speed as a company. So an example of this is to watch where the growth opportunities are in your company. Get into visions that are growing and ride the curl with that division. You'll find your career grows as that wave grows, and you can have incredible time doing it as well. Follow me for more information like this.

Answer 1

Было бы проще,если бы написан был перевод,чтобы уже наверняка,ну ладушки. Ошибочки есть, , но я лучше перепишу и оформлю всё это подобным образом:

Lets think about your career as a surfer. What i mean is when you are a

surfer sitting on a surfboard, you've got three choices: 1) how to handle a wave, 2) manage the board , 3) have a speed on the board .

One of them: you can sit on your board and let the wave pass right under you, and you will miss all the excitement that will happen after that when it turns into a big swell and into a big wave.  

The second option is to get a little excited, bend over the board, row too fast, get in front of this wave, and you can be absolutely crushed.

And the last one: It means rowing on the board at the speed that you have, entering the turn and riding on the twisting - the journey of your whole life.

I participated in the third wave, and I could tell you about the early jobs in my career where I had a chance to grow with the company at the same speed as the company itself. So, an example of this is observing where there are opportunities for growth in your company. Immerse yourself in the visions that are developing and ride the curl with this unit. (если дословно,так хотите)

А там решайте сами,что лучше, удачи)!

Answer 2

I want you to think about your career like a surfer. Now, what I mean by that is, when you're a surfer sitting on a surfboard, you've got three choices in how to handle a wave. One of them is to sit on your board and let the wave go right underneath you, missing all the excitement that happens after it turns into a big swell and a big wave. The second choice is to get a little too excited, get out over your board, paddle too fast, and get in front of that wave, which can lead to getting crushed and not having much fun. Now, look at the third choice: paddling your board at the speed of that wave and getting into the curl, riding that curl for the ride of your life. I've chosen the third wave, and I can tell you about early moments in my career when I had the chance to grow with the company at the same speed as the company itself.

An example of this is to observe where the growth opportunities lie within your company. Get involved with divisions that are experiencing growth and ride the curl with that division. You'll find that your career will grow as that wave of opportunity grows, and you can have an incredible time doing it as well. Follow me for more information like this.

(Note: I made some minor grammatical and structural changes to improve the overall clarity and flow of the text.)