Question

ПОМОГИТЕ пожалуйста, исправьте чтобы было приемлемо сдать учителю «My family is the centre of my life. In ours there's just parents my elder brother and I. We all live under one roof. My brother and I don't always get on, but he all my life care for me. My parents make us feel special. They usually support me.»

Answer 1

My family is the centre of my life. There are just parents, my older brother and me in my family. We live under the same roof. My brother and I don't always get along well, but he has been caring for me for my whole life. My parents make us feel special. They usually support me.

Answer 2

Вроде в первом предложении не is a are
во втором предложении не правильная структура,нужно подлежащее потом сказуемое потом все остальное

Answer 3

"My Family: The Core of My Life

My family holds a central place in my life. Our family unit consists of my parents, my elder brother, and myself. We all share the same household, living under one roof. While my brother and I might not always see eye to eye, he has consistently shown care for me throughout my life. My parents play a significant role in making us feel cherished and valued. They are always there to provide their support, which I am truly grateful for."