Question

Написать открытку на английском, все ли написано правильно? Hi Lili, How are you? I would like to invite you to the party in honor my birthday. Do come in 18:00pm to my home. I’m sure you’ll like it! Kisses Jane

Answer 1

Hi Lili,

How are you? I would like to invite you to celebrate my birthday party.

You are welcome to come at 6 pm to my house

I am more than sure that you will enjoy the party

Best wishes

Jane

Answer 2

Almost everything is written correctly, but there are a couple of minor mistakes. Here's the corrected version:

"Hi Lili, How are you? I would like to invite you to the party in honor of my birthday. Do come at 6:00 pm to my home. I'm sure you'll like it! Kisses, Jane."

Changes made:

1. "in honor my birthday" should be "in honor of my birthday."
2. "18:00pm" should be "6:00 pm." The 12-hour clock format is commonly used in spoken English. Also, it's not necessary to include "pm" as "6:00 pm" already indicates the evening time.