Question

Помогите с английским. Проверьте грамматику I want to share a little strange story that a friend told me. It was an ordinary day. She was already preparing for bed, as it seemed to her that there was someone in the room. Girlfriend scared. She opened her eyes and saw a shadow by the window. A friend thought that she seemed and fell asleep The next day it all happened again. But the creak was added to everything. A friend was so scared that she screamed at the whole apartment. Parents ran into her room. They turned on the light. It turns out that in the afternoon mother brought a huge palm tree in a large pot to the room and set it behind the curtain. A friend admitted that she had never been as scary as that night.

Answer 1

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Answer 2

I want to share a little strange story that a friend told me. It was an ordinary day. She was already preparing for bed when it seemed to her that there was someone in the room. My girlfriend got scared, she opened her eyes and saw a shadow by the window. My friend thought that she was just imagining things and eventually fell asleep. The next day it all happened again, but this time a creaking sound was added to everything. My friend was so scared that she screamed throughout the whole apartment. Her parents ran into her room and turned on the light. It turned out that earlier that day, her mother had brought a huge palm tree in a large pot into the room and set it behind the curtain. My friend admitted that she had never been as scared as she was that night.