Question

Помогите проверить текст, составил текст, но не уверен что всё в правильно в плане грамматики ANNOTATION As the title implies the article describes the correlation between big data and cloud computing. The article begins with a presentation of the main aspects of big data processing and their relationship with cloud storage. The purpose of this article is to introduce the reader to such concepts as storage and processing of big data, cloud technologies and computing environments and their application. The also much attention is given to problems related to cloud technologies and storing big data in the cloud. It is specially noted question privacy and security of big data storage. The paper presents a brief review of the possible consequences of insufficient data protection, as well as the requirements for data protection when stored in the cloud. The final part of the paper discusses the prospects for further development of big data and cloud storage technology. This article is of interest both for people working in the field of information technology, and for anyone who somehow works with information.

Answer 1

Ответ:

ANNOTATION

As the title implies the article describes the correlation between big data and cloud computing. The article begins with a presentation of the main aspects of big data processing and their relationship with cloud storage.

The purpose of this article is to introduce the reader to such concepts as storage and processing of big data, cloud technologies and computing environments and their application. Аlso much attention is given to problems related to cloud technologies and storing big data in the cloud. It is specially noted question privacy and security of big data storage. The paper presents a brief review of the possible consequences of insufficient data protection, as well as the requirements for data protection when stored in the cloud.

The final part of the paper discusses the prospects for further development of big data and cloud storage technology.

This article is of interest both for people working in the field of information technology, and for anyone who somehow works with information.

Была только одна ошибка. Я испавила

Answer 2

Ваш текст уже довольно близок к правильной грамматике, но есть несколько моментов, которые можно улучшить. Вот исправленная версия:

ANNOTATION

As the title implies, this article describes the correlation between big data and cloud computing. The article begins with a presentation of the main aspects of big data processing and their relationship with cloud storage. The purpose of this article is to introduce the reader to concepts such as the storage and processing of big data, cloud technologies, and computing environments, as well as their applications. Additionally, much attention is given to problems related to cloud technologies and storing big data in the cloud, with a special focus on questions of privacy and security in big data storage.

The paper also provides a brief review of the possible consequences of insufficient data protection, along with the requirements for data protection when stored in the cloud. The final part of the paper discusses the prospects for the further development of big data and cloud storage technology. This article is of interest to both individuals working in the field of information technology and anyone who is involved with information in any capacity.