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Formal email to college (5 paragraphs, 140-150 words) даю 15 баллов

Answer 1

Hi There,

I need to get in contact with several universities to obtain some information about BA "top up" courses in Graphic Design. I have been rejected for Camberwell so need to try other options. I would extremely appreciate that you guys aware me about any correction that need to be done in the below mail. Many thanks in advance!

 

 

I am currently a second year student at Camberwell College of Arts, doing my final year in Fda Graphic Design. I am interested in your BA (Hons) in Graphic & Media Design (top up) program.

I am writing to you with the desire to top up my third year at Hereford College of Arts. I am highly interested in attending your university. I would appreciate to know if you are happy to consider late applications and further information.

Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to your acceptance.

Sincerely yours,

Answer 2

Subject: Request for Extension of Application Deadline

Dear [College Name] Admissions Committee,

I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to formally request an extension of the application deadline for the upcoming academic year at [College Name]. I understand that the original deadline for applications is [Original Deadline Date], but due to unforeseen circumstances, I am facing challenges in submitting my application on time.

Firstly, I want to express my sincere interest in joining the [College Name] community. Your esteemed institution aligns perfectly with my academic and personal goals, and I am highly motivated to become a part of it. Unfortunately, recent personal and family circumstances have disrupted my application timeline.

I am confident that with an extension of the application deadline, I can provide a more comprehensive and well-prepared application that truly reflects my capabilities and potential. This additional time will enable me to gather all necessary documents, secure the best possible letters of recommendation, and craft a compelling personal statement that demonstrates my commitment to [College Name]'s values and mission.

I understand that granting an extension is at your discretion, and I genuinely appreciate your consideration of my request. If it is possible to extend the deadline by [Proposed Extension Duration], I assure you that I will make the most of this opportunity and submit my application with the utmost care and attention to detail.

Thank you for your time and understanding. I look forward to the possibility of being a part of the [College Name] community and contributing to its academic and cultural diversity.

Sincerely,

[Your Name] [Your Contact Information]