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Проверьте текст на ошибки I have got a favorite holiday - this is my birthday. This holiday is the most long-awaited and beloved one, because on this day, I have got all the attention of my family. My birthday there is a family holiday. We celebrate at home with the family. I don't like noisy companies. On my birthday, parents arrange a real holiday, give gifts. For lunch we all gather at the festive table. On my birthday, there is always my favorite salmon dish and Brownie chocolate cake. I like all the holidays. Why? Indeed, on such days you relax and you can pamper yourself with sweets and communication with loved ones.​

Answer 1

I have got a favorite holiday - this is my birthday. This holiday is the most long-awaited and beloved one, because on this day, I have got all the attention of my family. My birthday there is a family holiday. We celebrate at home with the family. I don't like noisy companies.

On my birthday, parents arrange a real holiday, give gifts. For lunch we all gather at the festive table. On my birthday, there is always my favorite salmon dish and Brownie chocolate cake.

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"I have a favorite holiday - it's my birthday. This holiday is the most long-awaited and beloved one because on this day, I receive all the attention from my family. My birthday is a family celebration. We celebrate it at home with the family. I don't like noisy gatherings. On my birthday, my parents arrange a real celebration and give gifts. For lunch, we all gather at the festive table. On my birthday, my favorite salmon dish and Brownie chocolate cake are always served. I love all holidays. Why? Because on such days, you can relax and pamper yourself with sweets and enjoy the company of loved ones."