Question

You have received an email message from your English-speaking pen-friend Lily: From: [email protected] To: [email protected] Subject: Holidays … You’ve probably seen the photos which I took on my holiday. During the rainy days we are having now they bring back good memories! ...Where did you spend your last autumn holidays? What did you do during your holidays? What school holidays do you like most of all and why?... 100-120 слов

Answer 1

Ответ:

Dear Lily,

Thank you for your letter. I hope you're well. I was glad to hear from you again.

In your letter, you asked me about my last autumn holidays. My family and I went to Bulgaria. We lived in a small cottage in the mountains and spent most of the time walking, exploring the area and admiring the nature. As for your last question, I think that summer holidays are my favourite. They last for three months, so I have plenty of time to relax and do what I want. Besides, in summer we usually go to the seaside, and I love swimming.

Sorry, I have to go now. Keep in touch.

Yours,

<ваше имя>

(115 слов)

Объяснение:

Как написать ОГЭшное письмо:

• Приветствие: "Dear <имя друга>,"
• Вступление (с большой буквы, несмотря на запятую после приветствия): "Thank you for your last letter. I hope you're well. I was glad to hear from you again."
• Основная часть. Начать можно так: "In your letter you asked me about..." или "As for your questions,..." 
• Потом идут ответы на вопросы. Лучше отвечать в том порядке, в котором они заданы, но это необязательно.
• Заключение. Можно написать что-то вроде: "That's all for now." или "Sorry, I have to go now." 
• Потом надежда на продолжение переписки: "Keep in touch." / "Write back soon." / "I'm looking forward to hearing from you."
• Завершающая фраза (после нее запятая): "Best wishes," / "Love," / "Yours," / "All the best,"
• Ваше имя (точка не ставится).

Еще пара моментов:

• Использование линкеров: "In my opinion," / "Personally," / "In my view," и т.д. - главное, чтобы письмо было связным.
• Жесткий лимит, за который выходить нельзя ни под каким видом: 90 - 132 слова (+-10% сверху и снизу).
• Между абзацами оставляется пустая строка.
• Необходимо использовать сокращения, так как переписка дружеская и неформальная.

#SPJ3

Answer 2

Dear Lily,

I hope this email finds you well. It was delightful to receive your message and hear about your holiday. I must admit, the photos you shared were absolutely stunning! They indeed brought back fond memories, especially during these rainy days.

As for my last autumn holidays, I spent them exploring the beautiful countryside. I ventured into the picturesque mountains and enjoyed the vibrant colors of the changing leaves. I also took long walks in the crisp, refreshing air, appreciating the tranquility of nature.

When it comes to school holidays, my favorite is definitely the summer break. The longer days and warmer weather allow for various outdoor activities and adventures. I often go swimming, have picnics with friends, and explore new places. It's a time of freedom and relaxation, providing the perfect opportunity to unwind and rejuvenate.

I'm curious to know more about your future plans for holidays. Are there any destinations you're excited to visit or activities you're looking forward to trying? Feel free to share more about your experiences and aspirations.

Take care, and I look forward to hearing from you soon!

Best regards, [Your Name]