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Пожалуйста проверьте, есть ли ошибки? Hi, Philip. I am very glad to get your letter. How are you? How to study? I was in abroad three 3 times. I visited twice in Egypt and summer 2013 in Turkey. I prefer to spend holidays in abroad, because I really want to see new places, learn the culture of the country and communicates with foreigners. Abroad I especially love to swim the sea, sunbathing, walking on a variety of excursions, but still love to buy all sorts of souvenirs and clothes. This summer we are going to fly the whole family abroad once again, I hope we meet again. With love, Alsou

Answer 1

How to study - перевод: Как учиться? Чтобы спросить, как у него идет учеба, лучше сказать: How are your studies? или How are your studies going?
I have been abroad three times (Здесь нужно время Present Perfect). I visited Egypt twice (или: I have been to Egypt twice) and was in Turkey last summer.
В следующем предложении - перед abroad никогда не нужен предлог (to spend holidays abroad) и communicate (без -s).
To swim in the sea (всегда с предлогом). Лучше в этом предложении, чтобы везде стоял герундий (глаголы с окончанием -ing). I love swimming in the sea... going (не walking) on.. excursions
Лучше сказать This summer our whole family is going to go abroad once again. I hope we'll (we will - будущее время) meet again.

Answer 2

Hi, Philip. I'm glad to receive your letter. How are you? How's your studying going? I have been abroad three times. I visited Egypt twice and spent the summer of 2013 in Turkey. I enjoy spending holidays abroad because I get to explore new places, experience different cultures, and interact with foreigners. One of my favorite activities abroad is swimming in the sea, sunbathing, going on various excursions, and buying souvenirs and clothes. This summer, my whole family is planning to go abroad again, and I hope we can meet up. With love, Alsou.