Question

Написала сочинение по английскому, проверьте его пожалуйта на наличие ошибок)) My family is the centre of my life. I live with my parents and my younger brother. We live in a very friendly atmosphere, care and helps each others. We cheerfully spend time together. I often meet with my grandparents. Holidays we note everything together. I love my family and I want that allchildren had same parents loving them as at me.

Answer 1

All children пишется раздельно, а не allchildren
А так ты написала отлично. Мне понравилось))!!!

Answer 2

Here is the corrected version of your essay:

"My family is the center of my life. I live with my parents and my younger brother. We live in a very friendly atmosphere, caring for and helping each other. We cheerfully spend time together. I often meet with my grandparents. We celebrate holidays together. I love my family, and I wish that all children had parents who love them as much as mine do."

Note: I made a few changes to improve the grammar and clarity of your essay. Good job expressing your love and appreciation for your family!