Question

Проверьте пожалуйста сочинение, если есть ошибки исправьте. This is a story of Tom Daley. He was born is UK is Plymouth, England, 21 May 1994. At the age of seven years he become more and more interesting  for coaches. Later in 2003 he mat Leon Taylor. Next year he becomes by his mentor. In 2008 he started to work for he come to the Olympic Games in Beijing. Most of his friends say that he is very sociable and cheerful. It is not surprising that he became a successful athlete. Finally this year he won a bronze medal at the Olympics.

Answer 1

This is a story about Tom Daley. He was born in UK in Plymouth 21 may 1994. At the age of seven he starting more interesting in coaches. Later in 2003 we mat Leon Taylor. In the next year he became a mentor. In 2008 he started work hard because he wanted to come to the Olympic Games in Beijing. Most of his friends said that he is very sociable and cheerful. It is not surprising that he became a successful athlete. Finally, in this year he won a bronze medal at the Olympics.

Answer 2

This is a story of Tom Daley. He was born in Plymouth, England, on 21 May 1994. At the age of seven, he became increasingly interested in diving and caught the attention of coaches. In 2003, he met Leon Taylor, who would become his mentor. The following year, Leon Taylor took him under his wing. In 2008, Tom began his journey to qualify for the Olympic Games in Beijing. Known for his sociable and cheerful nature, it comes as no surprise that he became a successful athlete. Finally, this year, he won a bronze medal at the Olympics.